I dunno if I love more the way you did the sky or the girl sitting on the clouds! xD
I guess I love them both equally!
In my opinion you ARE getting somewhere! :3
The drawing overall got a great impact, even it is "delicate" in the traits and in the colouring, it is AMAZING, I mean! ^_^
You certainly ARE improving, now get some rest for your wrist, though! xD